Writing Task 1: Map / Plan (change over time): Question 6

Syllabus W.task1

Structured 4 marks

The maps below show the centre of the town of Fenmarsh in 1998 and in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Map 1 (1998): Fenmarsh town centre is a roughly square area enclosed on all four sides by a ring road. Bridge Street runs from north to south through the middle of the town and was, in 1998, a two-way road with parking bays along both sides. In the north-west section, a row of shops faced onto Bridge Street. Directly opposite, in the north-east section, stood the Town Hall, with Fenmarsh Green, a small park, in front of it. Halfway along the west side of Bridge Street was a bus stop. In the south-west section was a surface car park, and in the south-east section stood a bank and a second row of shops. Bridge Street met the ring road at a roundabout at its northern end and at a second roundabout at its southern end.

Map 2 (2024): By 2024, the central section of Bridge Street, between the two roundabouts, had been closed to traffic and paved over as a pedestrianised precinct, with trees and benches installed along both sides. The parking bays and the bus stop that had stood on Bridge Street were removed; a new bus station was built on the ring road on the north side of the town. The surface car park in the south-west section was replaced by a multi-storey car park on the same site. A new row of shops was built on the east side of the pedestrianised street, facing the original shops in the north-west section. A cycle lane was added running around the inside of the ring road. The Town Hall, Fenmarsh Green and the bank in the south-east section remained in their original positions.

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Examiner notes: why this is a band 9 response

Task Achievement

The overview names the single most important change, pedestrianisation combined with the relocation of parking and transport to the ring road, before any specific detail is given, and the body paragraphs then report only the features that actually changed, closing with an explicit note of what stayed the same rather than re-describing unchanged features at length.

Coherence & Cohesion

Information is grouped by theme (the pedestrianised street and its transport changes, then the remaining site changes, then what was unchanged) rather than moving randomly around the map. Referencing devices (“this central section”, “elsewhere”) and time markers (“in 1998”, “by 2024”) make the sequence of change easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

Precise map-report vocabulary is used throughout: passive change-of-state verbs (“was closed”, “was replaced”, “was constructed”) combined with accurate location language (“to the north of the town”, “on the east side of the pedestrianised street”).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Past simple and past perfect are used correctly to sequence the 1998 state and the 2024 outcome (“had been closed”, “was removed and replaced”), and passive constructions are formed accurately throughout with no errors of tense or agreement.

Common pitfalls specific to this task

See commonMistakes above: the most damaging is adding an opinion about whether pedestrianisation was a good decision. Task 1 map reports must state only what changed and where, never whether the change was beneficial.